Lesson 45: Hook to Chorus: Rolling Stone
This lesson explores expanding a hook into a
whole
chorus. This is the usual "next step" in writing a song after you've
written a
hook (
Lesson 44: Hook Melodies).
To learn ways to expand a hook into a chorus, we'll study how "real songs" do
it. For this lesson, we'll look at
Like A Rolling Stone by Bob Dylan
(link at end of lesson). If you don't remember this
Rolling Stone's
hook, then first review:
To review, the
Rolling Stone hook (at 1:05 in the recording) consists
of:
Repeating the Hook Phrase
How did Bob expand this hook into a whole chorus? It's driven by the lyrics.
Bob continues with more short phrases, like lines of poetry:
How does it feel
How does it feel
To be without a home
Like a complete unknown
Like A Rolling Stone?
To
set these lines to music, Bob does the obvious thing: He
repeats the two-measure
chord phrase (C F G) over and over. And,
he also more-or-less repeats the hook
melody (at least the melody
rhythm) over and over, along with the 2-measure chord phrase. Here's a
sketch of the chords and lyrics together:
| |
C | F |
G |
| || |
/ / | / / | |
/ / | / | / |
| |
How does it feel | |
| |
| How does | it feel |
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ | / | / |
/ | | |
|
| |
| To | be without |
a home |
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ | / | / |
/ | | |
|
| |
| Like | a complete |
unknown |
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ | / | / |
/ | | |
|
| |
| Like A | Rolling |
Stone? |
Melody Pitches
How does Bob choose the melody
notes? Most of the pitches in this
melody don't seem that important to me; it wouldn't matter much if they were
changed a bit, and lots of them are just the
tonic (the note
C,
which is also this song's
key). The most important pitches are the
last one in each phrase. This song is in the
key of C; here is
the
scale degree, in the key of C, of each of these last-in-the-phrase
notes:
… feel: | note E = degree 3 |
… feel: | note E = degree 3 |
… home: | note E = degree 3 |
… unknown: |
note E = degree 3 |
… Stone: | note C = degree 1 |
The 1st 4 phrases end on
degree 3, which does not sound particularly
"final"; then the last phrase, the words "Like A Rolling Stone", ends on
degree 1, the key's
tonic, which
does sound "final".
Ending the melody on degree 1 like this is not a
rule, but it's very,
very common.
Stretching the Ending
After singing the last word in the chorus, "Stone", Bob
could have
simply finished the 2-measure chord phrase
( |
C F |
G || )
and continued straight on to Verse 2, like this:
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ | / | / |
/ | | |
|
| |
| Like A | Rolling |
Stone? |
|
C | F |
G |
| |
[Verse 2] |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ / |
/ | / |
|| |
|
| |
|
Oh | you've |
… |
However, what Bob
actually does is this:
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ | / | / |
/ | | |
|
| |
| Like A | Rolling |
Stone? |
|
C | F |
G |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ / | / / | |
|
| |
| [harmonica] |
|
C | F |
G |
G |
| |
[Verse 2] |
| |
/ / | / / | |
/ / / / | |
/ / |
/ | / |
|| |
|
[harmonica] |
|
|
Oh | you've |
… |
This "actual" chorus does several things to stretch the ending:
- Repeats the 2-measure chord phrase an extra time
- Plays a harmonica lick to fill the extra time
- Stretches the last G chord from 1 measure to
2 measures
These "stretching" ideas are totally optional. They create a "dramatic pause"
before Verse 2, but the song "works fine" without them. If you like them, add
them to your bag of songwriting tricks.
Do It Yourself
This
Like A Rolling Stone example is just one way out of thousands to
expand a hook into a chorus. To get started creating your own chorus, you can
use ideas from this example if you want. However, as you go on, to avoid
feeling like you're just copying
Like A Rolling Stone all the time,
you'll want to learn hook-expanding ideas from many songs. So, I'd suggest
adding activities like these to your writing exercises (from
Lesson 2: Practicing Songwriting):
-
Analyze how the hook is expanded into a chorus in songs you like.
-
Practice using the ideas you find. Try mixing ideas from different
songs, so your own chorus doesn't sound too much like any other particular
song. Try inventing your own original variations of ideas you find.
Next:
Start exploring
adding a verse to a chorus, in
Lesson 46: Melody Rhythm: Rolling Stone.
Song link:
For
Like A Rolling Stone, I used the recording from
The
Essential Bob Dylan ($1.29 at
Amazon
as of this writing).